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"This is the sad story of my life" , said Jenny and (make) a pause. "Please, (not,stop)" , (cry) yhe girl. "You (not,begin) your story yet".
Jenny (smile) and (go) on "I (live) with my aunt all my life and now I still (live) with her. She (be) a very strong personality. She always (be) like that. So my aunt usually (give ) me orders and I (follow) them. So, you see, I (have) a very difficult life, and I am sure I (have) it in the future.